Like No Hand Before

A bit of a love poem. But between whom?

Like No Hand Before

 

Like no hand before

His caresses her soul

Tracing character,

With charisma and compassion.

Lifting from her

What no other has had the courage

To muster.

She flutters in depths

That have hungered for light

In her sanctity of darkness.

Risen by the power

And perfection of a touch,

She clings to life once more

And wonders at this miracle,

Like no man before.

 

Legion

11Nov00

Reviews

[octane143]

ok this is beautiful but I sense some undertones here, or maybe Im just in a heightened state from my last post you reviewed lol. I feel like it is sensual, nt just about the emotions, but then again I'm underloved at the moment ~.^ You invoke such wonderful images in the minds of your reader and leave us wanting more. Thanks for the request!

[Kaara]

Beautifully written, evocative... but the nosy child in me wants to know more. What is it he has drawn from her? is it only love... or is it submission... or it is something altogether different. Inquiring minds...

[Legion]

You'd be surprised if I tell you.

It's actually about a woman finding God. ;)

[Kaara]

lol.. which would encompass both love and submission.. very nice

[darkgurl]

"She clings to life once more
And wonders at this miracle,
Like no man before."

Like these lines write here, This is a wonderful write, like it....Kim

[Periac]

wonderful write ...there is some really good images here and the lines you create are flowing and beautiful...
"She flutters in depths"
awesome

[Poeta {NV Torres}]

I'm in love with this one...

"Lifting from her
What no other has had the courage
To muster."

That part just sums up what love is all about. Beautiful.

[Floating on the feather..]

This has been wonderfully painted with love.
I like these very much

She flutters in depths

That have hungered for light

In her sanctity of darkness.

Good write.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

That one is interesting.

"Like no hand before
His caresses her soul
Tracing character,
With charisma and compassion.
Lifting from her
What no other has had the courage
To muster."

That just brings back some memories. But, I am more looking forward to the future than dealing with the past! The future looks brighter and brighter!

Great write!

-Gabe