A Moment Unhindered

Something I was thinking about tonight dealing with a situation involving the past, present, and future.

A Moment Unhindered

 

A moment unhindered

Crashed headlong

Into the past.

Fleeting,

Now straining

Into the uncertainty

Of what is to come.

 

A moment remembered

Thought provoked

Into living.

Dreaming,

Now waking

Into the reality

Of what has been forgotten.

 

A moment considered

Held tightly

Into longing.

Grasping,

Now clutching

Onto the possibility

Of what could be.

 

Legion

5Mar08

Reviews

[RareRed]

"A moment Unhindered, Crashed headlong, Into the past"...those words really stood out and caused me to stop and the start reading all over again. I really like this poem. The words are so well put together and make you stop and think yourself. Great Write!

[Deena Miller]

Wow, I am deeply impressed. you have some strong imagery at work here... this one really grabbed me right here *points at heart*. I look forward to reading more of your poetry, and I will gladly add you to my favorites...or whatever they call it here :)

[thecoolone52]

A moment considered
Held tightly
Into longing.
Grasping,
Now clutching
Onto the possibility
Of what could be.


that last stanza is very goooooood i really enjoyed it!!! Nice work bro!!!

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Interesting piece. What does the future hold? How will the past affect it? And, more to the point, where did I leave my beer?

Great write!

-Gabe

[Kim]

interesting way of looking at the past, remembering it and looking to the future while living that past. I was very intriguid by this poem. Good way of tying them all together