She Likes Poultry

Something fun I was goofing around with. But I hope if I ever become famous for my writing that people don't consider this the pinnacle of my work. LOL

 

 

 

She Likes Poultry

 

 

 

My gal she lieks dat poultry

Always readin up on da stuff

Books an ledders frum lubbers

She jest cant git enuff

Shookspare wid his

Rumao an Julia

And Darndes Inburno

She says will do ya

Bud her favoright

Ov all dat poultry

Is wun wridden

By her won an onlee

 

Sew take dat all you

Wridders ov poultry

Wid ur witz and ur wurds

Hur hard belones

Two me onlee

Cause mie poultry makes us lub burds

 

Legion

30June08

Author's Note

Seriously, I hope it's not my pinnacle. :)

Reviews

[Angelheaded Hipster]

This is cute...a write from a love struck illiterate guy. I had a smile on my face at the end of the write, and you know...it says a lot....its not the words, well, it is the words, but its also how they are portrayed.

Its the message, no matter how badly misspelled.

[Tai Chi Italy]

Awww Legion, with an accent too!lol I Clever Legion? lol YOu pin that cull so well!!rofl Tai

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Ahhhh...god ilovedthis one..it was great..really brings a persons spirit up...great job!

[Dani California]

lol! love it!

kinda feels like something out of the book "clockwork orange",
but easier to understand.. ;P

hahaha.. original! indeed!

I got such a kick out of this.. lol
en dats da truef!

[Jeremiah Medina]

hehe its fun making fun of people who talk dumb.... anywho... nice write... thanks for the review as well... You rock...

[Jet Lag]

kudzu kute! :)

[Ms Jessica Renee]

Now here is a piece of work that stands out above the rest and well it just brings about the giggles. Well done.

[Cardinal Robin]

Ha ha ha ha hahah...okayyyyyyyyyy...ha ha ha ha ha ha ha......ummmm....hahahahahahahahahahahaha,
Robin

[jen]

zats uh kudest sang i ebber reeded... ends saw tetching tew