A Man Divided

Using math to describe a feeling within a haiku. Yea, I went there.

A Man Divided

 

 

A man divided

Exponentially fractioned,

Subtracting from life.

 

Legion

16SEP08

Author's Note

Just something I've been feeling of late. This, too, shall pass.

Reviews

[Cardinal Robin]

Fascinating on the conundrum side O' things...as a chi kung guy I'm curious...In what way do you find divided and fractioned a subtractive? Enigmatic excellence! A most unique artistic blurb...as in "Is it even a puzzle?"
Perhaps as I read it Haiku style you mean that that is your chosen path in this passing time...to subtract, along with the previous lines... Hmmmm

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

yeah. i agree to spoken. your chosen words fits in arithmetically and brilliantly. love haikus!

[Spoken]

lol, yes you went there.. and it's a sweet place to be. Word choices are essential in this type of poem, you've picked your words perfectly. Well done.