Clouding Chat rooms

Enter my chat room, I dare ya! In love with the mind, a dreamer!

Foster my intellect, preside over my random thoughts, and amorphous my feelings.

 I like to dream. 

 It is impossible to fathom as the breath of the universe.

 What do I speak of with love?

The brain. 

 Even when you don't let me sleep.

Reviews

[JayG]

S few points:

Don't talk to your reader, involve them, emotionally.

And aside from not knowing who might want shapeless feelings, "amorphous" is not a verb.

And finally, though you might have intent for the disconnected thoughts that intent doesn't make it to the text, so it's lost.

Sorry my news isn't better.