Tommy Got Back

 

Walking in the shadow 
Is a Tommy who got back 
He's got snuffed out eyes 
He's still under attack 

He'll scurry on by 
In the dead of the night 
A muddy faced soldier 
Now forever in flight 

So don't drop that plate 
Or you'll shatter his nerves 
While he tries to make sense 
Of the country he serves 

He can't quite face you 
He needs to be alone 
He feels kind of numb 
Like waves on a stone 

These were the boys 
Who went out as men 
They came back as ghosts 
Or usually, never again 

So if anybody asks 
Why did they die? 
Just tell them that 
'For freedom that’s why' 

And if you hear voices 
While alone in your bed 
It'll be the souls of the many 
Who are not long dead 

They are still restless 
And have a message to give 
'I gave my life for you 
So live well, live' 

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

It's a poem that fits in the light of Remembrance Day that is passed this week. War is a harsh thing, people fight, people die. Those who return will never be the same again. I read it all in these lines. A very sad thing but very well written. Liked it.

[emmajoy]

'These were the boys ~ Who went out as men ~ They came back as ghost ~ Or usually, never again'

True, every word, full of emotions without the banging of drums or waving of flags. You use language very discreetly and respectfully. Can't and won't fault a word of this. Thank you.

[Gee]

Quite apt I came across this poem. So many have died and will continue to do so. My daughter was born 11/11/2000 so I always refer to her as an armistice baby.
Enjoyed th e read

[Avia]

Wow. Soldiers are special people. I really admire those who dedicate their lives to the service others. This is a well written poem, though it's sad. Its a good piece. I liked reading it.

[Isabella Ivy]

A deserving tribute. Well penned. I.I.

[Phantom Heart]

Whew! Powerful poem.
"So don't drop that plate
Or you'll shatter his nerves
While he tries to make sense
Of the country he serves"

Hit home. I know a soldier that was killed and He was 23.

[Donald]

Quite a powerful piece, and makes one think.

[Sami Khalil]

"Just tell them that
'All wars are a lie'

And if you hear voices
While alone in your bed
It'll be the souls of the many
Who are not long dead

They are still restless"

An amazing poem and message. Very impact-full and relevant...:)..............

[Leigh]

A war poem for Remembrance Sunday November 11th