Reboot

old poem

It would be so nice to delete my life and start over.
To delete places, promises, people, events.

It would be so nice to be born again without memory.
Without memory of places, promises, people, events.

It would be so nice to wake up one morning and know nothing.
To know nothing about places, promises, people, events.

To forget you, that would be the nicest thing.

Reviews

[Michael G.]

I think the content of this poem is rather good. The flow helps bring to the surface the emotions. I'm not a fan of this type of font or layout though... it's hard on my old eyes.
So you want a reboot, a "do-over?" Sorry, you can't through everything away and start over. You learn from what you did and move on. Like the old saying says, "you shouldn't throw the baby out with the bath water." That would be a waste. And from what I've read in your poems here, you are not one to sit and waste time.
Keep writing.

[Ina Waltz]

Thank you for a constructive review. I'll take your advice on font and layout, and try to pick something more soothing. :)
You're right. Yet, sometimes we all wish we could have a "do-over". Honestly, I never understood why as we all can only learn from our mistakes. I just love to write about the things I know, but don't understand. I feel like I'm exploring myself and others through my writing.
Thank you once again!

[DrD]

You don't need a new start, dear lady, you need a new ending. Well done and I enjoyed this work greatly.

[Ina Waltz]

Possibly! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[Emrick]

Awesome. The idea is good,the title is good and the Flow is good too.
It's an interesting poem.

[Ina Waltz]

Thank you for your review!

[Poison Ivy]

i know how you feel
nicely done

[Ina Waltz]

thank you :)

[Eloha]

I agree, I`ve contemplated this theme a lot. Great topic. Quite original.

[Ina Waltz]

thank you for your lovely review!