War

A Poem by Ina Waltz

Men used to fight out of need

now they fight out of greed

© 2013 Ina Waltz

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dunnia

Short and powerful

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stanley Wilson

well said

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KAOlmsted

Your brevity takes nothing away from the truthfulness in this piece. Spot on and well done.

-kimmer

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. Wood ?

can't say truer than that

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarahthirk

Extremely short and simple yet extremely true. Those two sentences pretty much sum up society today. This poem may benefit from two extra lines, but that's your call to make. Short, sweet, and to the point. Very well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on January 2, 2013
Last Updated on January 2, 2013

Author

Ina Waltz

Zagreb, -- Please Select --, Croatia

About

I write poetry and short stories. I also draw and paint abstract images that my mind creates in order to understand the world and myself. I cannot live without creative outlet; when I don't write/pain.. more..