My Creepy Teacher

What's so creepy about my teacher? Maybe it is because he is a great person. Enjoy!

MY CREEPY TEACHER.

I got a teacher, who looks real creepy;
Long hair, moustache and a bow tie,
how freaky.
 He also brings his rabbit to class;
it sits in a basket and eats,
Mars bars.

Sonia my school friend sits next to me;
and makes funny noises,
I’m sure it’s not me.
The teacher says, “Please go outside”;
And laughs at the blackboard,
and then he hides.

The boy in front always takes my lunch;
He really likes grapes and eats,
the whole bunch.
The teacher just sits there and pulls a face;
He knows that this boy,
Is a waste of space.

One thing my teacher always remembers;
is the day of my birthday,
Around September.
He always brings a cake to class;
He’s not a bad bloke,
 and one hell of a laugh.

I will remember this funny man;
who looks out the window
and laughs when he can.
I think he recently turned thirty three;
but he is a good bloke,
and a lot like me.

Author's Note

Would love to hear your feedback as I am new to writing for children and would appreciate some help.
Cheers and thank you for taking the time to have a read.

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

As a teacher, I can tell you that it would be nice to have such a poem written about me :) I like the details you give here. Well penned, Leo! I like writes like these.

[Leonard Birch]

Thanks Rita. I must write anothery. Will try shortly ...
Thank you!