Time

I love time, but often there isn't enough hours in the day.

Time

 

Time

How the hours pass quickly.

Time

My every breath is measured.

Time

I tolerate her strike.

Time

It’s night.

Reviews

[Ted]

Sounds and feels like some sort of haiku, short but with great depth.

[Leonard Birch]

Thanks Ted. I really appreciate it.

Cheers

[Rita L. Sev]

I like the brevity here - definitely adds to the notion of time being so short. Great piece!

[Leonard Birch]

Thanks Rita. Yes 24 hours a day isn't long enough. I need 48.
All the best
Leo

[Sami Khalil]

Wow . What a great write with unique lines ...The ending was sooo good too... Thank you for penning ...:)

[Leonard Birch]

Thanks Sami. I am glad you like it. Cheers.
Leo

[Sami Khalil]

I did . You are wekcome...:)

[Angel Bella]

Liked it because i hated it. LOL this is not a contrasting view. I liked the way how the time is made fun of.

[Leonard Birch]

Thanks Angel for your feedback. Cheers!
Leo