i cry

something i was jus thinking bout

i hate that i cry over u

could be actaully true

that i wasted my time falling for u

then u kicked me away like a shoe

am i just suppose to forget about u

wondering wat did i do

is love this painful

that i have to cry over u

what do i do?

 

Author's Note

i was in a break up with my girlfriend that just dumbed me
im still kinda upset about so, if u can give me any advice to jus forget bout her
that would be great :)

Reviews

[Stephaniee]

This is really good, you've put a lot of emotion into this and its such a short piece. Very effective.

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Someone doesn't make your life

What really makes your life is your family, your friends, and the things which make you happy... what's the use of moaning for the one who hurt you??

Live your life, maybe she wasn't meant to be yours
Consider it as an experience in your life
There will come a day when you'll get THE one

As for the poem, i liked it, short, precise and sad ..

Take Care ..