When Your in a Mood

I hate when I argue with my husband and this is how I feel after we do so

When you're in a mood
You have an attitude
And can be incredibly rude
It leaves things confused
Why does it lead to such a feud?
Where words come across as crude
Both of our feelings are blackened and blued
And often our view points are misconstrued
Being nasty is not how we wish to be viewed
Yet out the insults are thoughtlessly spewed
It is best to separate and to sit and stew
Than to rip into a loved one
For only then the relationship has been slued

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

This is good advice. Only one thing "your" should be "you're" (you are).
"Crude" might be better than "lewd" as lewd can be good when applied to consenting adults. And it fits the rhyming scheme.
How in the world did you find "slued"? I had to look it up!
Again, good marital advice. It's easy to let it fly when you're fighting with one you love, but, it involves trust that disagreements don't automatically lead to separation and that arguing is safe.
I enjoyed this, and I'll be reading more of your work.

[LeslieNoel]

Thank you so much for reading this and for leaving good suggestions. I will definitely be making the changes. I actually went to google and typed in words that rhyme with rude. A bunch of them came up and that's how I found slued! I will take a look at some of your work as well a little later on.