Too Much

Too much

When there’s too many people,

too many things about,

it makes me want to hide myself

so I may give a shout.

Anger, fear, and pain

in my brain, it’s starting to rain.

I must seclude the out pour of emotions;

I wish there were some potion

or tonic that I could take.

I feel like no matter what I do,

my emotions are at stake.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

It’s all about balance and here in your poem, there is too much. Too much noise, too many people and I can certainly relate to that, preferring a quiet life. A reminder that our emotions can get the better of us. Enjoyed reading you.

Chris

[Fishysua]

I remember

When things were raw
Fear not refinement, it will make things sharper