Lost words

I just don't know what to say.

And I have tried everyday.

To write a poem for you.

But nothing seems to be coming through.

I have tired to write about the love we share.

But I look down at the paper and there is still nothing there.

It's like I can't explain the feelings in my heart.

And trying to explain would just tare it apart.

So everyyday I will just show you how I feel.

So that you know my love for you is real.

 

 

Reviews

[shunik]

very straight forward
=]

[外人 (Gaiji..]

So lovely !!!!!!!!!!!! Your PERFECT sounds mix so well with the great pathos of the poem that I'm speechless =D Your poem is simple but so elegant as well ! Just one thing: Did you mean "tried" at verse 5?
Please, PLEASE, try to step up the metrica, go for poems' schemes, work on these elements, your sounds and pathos are OUTSTANDING, stop playing safe, step it up !

[Rhea752]

i think we can all understand how hard expressing yourself can be. great poem. i absolutely loved it!!!!!!!

[Seanne Tholltree]

just a few wrong spelling,,but overall it's a nice poem

[BatFan38]

love it!

[Lina Grey]

Some feelings are stronger than words could ever be, and trying to express them is near impossible at times. This a sweet tribute to such feelings. Thank you.