You Don't Have To Love Me Anymore

Even though I don't want to keep being a jerk.

I have to make you hurt.

So that you will have the courage to leave.

You deserve better then me.

I would never want to let you go.

Darling how I wish you could know,

How much it hurts me to do this to you.

But I don't know what else to do.

So I will keep pushing tords the door.

So You don't have to love me anymore.

 

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Reviews

[Ice Girl]

aww so sad but really good :)

[Brittany DeFranco]

damn, so much feeling into this, I love it

[hopelessromantic]

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[eatmills]

So I will keep pushing you towards the door - Interestingly subjective, the door: I could picture you physically pushing him out the door of a house and then pushing him out the door of your heart.

You should really use your spell check, not only just to catch spelling mistakes but to give yourself a moment to reflect upon what you"ve have written. Just a great editing tool.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, this is actually a fantastic poem of yours Leslie! I can relate to this is so many ways I know that's for sure! Ha! I love how I can relate to most of your writings anyway. Maybe because you're my best friend. But there are some minor spelling errors, I'll point them out! :P

(You deserve better then me) "then" should be *than* since you're using comparsion. Makes sense? :)
(So I will keep pushing tords the door) "tords" should be *towards*
(So You don't have to love me anymore) "You" I don't know if you did it on accident but it shouldn't be captialized since it's not at the beginning of the sentence. So it should be *you*

Other than that, it's excellent and I enjoy your writing! Keep up the good work :)

Your best friend--- ;)

[Secret Lullaby]

THANKS(: I will fix it when i can(:

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Welcome and alright (;

[Lillianna Rey]

wow....so sweet and sad at the same time. I absolutely loved it. the flow of the words were perfect and i could tell you were writing this with your entire being. very good piece keep up the good work.

[Andrea Vargas]

I feel you have conveyed an honest reaction to the way most peple feel when they are in a relationship. It is hard to be with someone you most desire yet that maybe they could do bettter than you can leave an uneasy feeling. I love this write, it was spoken with a good heart!

[UnderCompulsion]

A really nice poem.It is well written and words somehow just flow like a river while I am reading it.Good job! :)

[Rhea752]

nicely written. i love the emotion in this piece. Keep it up!! :D

[Owlgirl]

This is so sad! Well written! Great poem! Awesome job!