Welcome To hell

Burn!!

I want them all to burn!

I crave for their screams!

To hear them beg for forgivness.

I'm out for blood.

Their tears mean nothing to me!

I have no pity for the damned.

Yes..Yes..Yes...

Oh the sweet saticfaction.

I can almost taste their fear.

Its like my own personal drug.

Scream!

I want to hear you scream!

More..More..MORE!!

They will be mine for eternity.

Forever they will burn!

Welcome To Hell B*****s hahahahaha

 

 

Author's Note

I have no idea what was going through my head when i wrote this...no more funny tasting water for me

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

: ) It's not so bad down here. It gets a little warm and we get to choose what happens to the person who follows us down here, so there is always some sort of musing qualities to be had. Was your inspiration something short of what road rage would be?! lol I Loved it..... L.I.P. Live in peace because it's Hell on Earth. ; ) xoxo -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

hahaha I was just super pissed off:) yeah I heard the weather is nice down there at this time of year:))))

[Patrick Henry]

Nice!! It's about 89 degrees, air condition isn't working, and it's 11:50pm. If there were showers in Hell.... I'm game. lol My best friends probably went to Hell..... : ) xox -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

hahaha

[Patrick Henry]

Road trip!! lol Wouldn't it be sweet to be the "Peter at the Gates" version, but down in Hell where you get to see the bullies and/or ones that you knew and deserved to be there in that moment, and you get to ...nudge them along into Hell's Gate?! : ) ...even get a poker. xxo -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

That..Would..Be..AWESOME!!!!!!!! It would be like a "payback b***h" moment!

[Patrick Henry]

I vote YES on "payback B***h"!! : ) Maybe, even play a little 80's rock ballad music in the background when all they see are our smiles. lol Definitely awesome!! xox -Mark

[B-poet]

An interesting and vindictive poem. I'll bet you were thinking in pictures when you wrote this. Great visualization of carrying out a desired passion of retribution on whom you referred to as the damned. Nice work. :)

[eatmills]

It almost sounds like a witch's chant. Very dark, perfect for Halloween.

[Secret Lullaby]

Thats the idea(:

[Crazy Cat Man]

Nice to be evil once in awhile :) love this

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was an angry, but great piece. I enjoyed the read. I feel like that about certain people. Thanks for sharing. :3

[Steven Cash]

This was... interesting to say the least

I feel this way about Child Molesters, Spouse Abusers, 9/11 Conspirators and Anti-Military people

[Jason Dyer]

What's wrong with being the bad guy now and then? Sounds like you need to be submitting to my contest! ;)

Cheers!

-D

[Secret Lullaby]

Well thanks(:

[Jason Dyer]

Most welcome!

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Happy-Hauntings%21/46812/

[Secret Lullaby]

thanks