Did I do something wrong??

 

It's been three days.

We haven't spoken in three days.

Did I do something wrong?

Was it something I said?

I'm sorry...

You won't look at me.

You just look down.

Did I hurt your feelings?

Did I make you mad?

I'm sorry...

I see you smile.

And you laugh with other people.

But not with me.

Only silance.

Did I make a mistake?

Did I make you sad?

I'm sorry...

Author's Note

My boyfriend ignored me for three days two weeks ago. On the the third day I broke up with him because someone told me that he wanted to break up with me. When I asked him why he wanted to break up with me he couldn't give me an answer.....so I just keep asking myself what did I do wrong?

Reviews

[Christopher Booyakasha]

niiiiiiceeeee! lol

[Personne]

Very sweet with the "I'm sorry." Those just break my heart. I love the sweetness of this poem, and sorry about your breakup. Your boyfriend didn't sound very kind anyways if he couldn't even give you a reason, so perhaps it is for the best.

[Blue Ivory]

Wow that must've been hard to deal with...And I know how you probably felt. I like the way you slip in the "I'm sorry". It adds a sweet tone to it. Good work!

[Trevor]

I liked this a lot. It's basically every teenager's thoughts into a poem. Sorry about your break up, though.

[Daniel Eckert]

A very sad yet good poem. I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing!

[Krista Weiss]

Awww sorry :( At least you got a really good poem out of it!! :)

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if he gave up, he isn't worthy. Amazing poem. nice flow and easy to relate to. Sorry to hear about such a hurtful position. i've been there once too.

[Ice Girl]

Amazing poem that really can relate to anyone who had broken up :)

[C.C. Marx]

You did nothing wrong if he isnt man enough to talk about his problems then he isn't worth it you will find someone better I know it! On a better note great poem :)

[DrD]

What you did wrong was to ask what you did wrong. Immature boys don't have the sensitivity of young women and I think you captured your feelings very well with a nice, poetic form. A nice job.
(Forget the jerk, write more poems)

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks so much(: