Obsessed

Pick up the phone!

I know you are alone.

Why do you ignore me?

We were ment to be!

I left you a note.

Did you even read what I wrote?

I love you!

What do I need to do,

To show you that I care.

I KNOW YOU'RE THERE!

I can hear you breathe.

You can't make me leave.

Why wont you come outside!

Boy there is no reason to hide.

I'm not mad.

You have just been bad.

I know you didn't mean to turn me down.

You were just trying be a funny clown ^_^

But now there is something you need to know.

I will be everywhere you go...........

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

There are a lot of girls out there that dont take rejection easy...

Reviews

[Alejandra]

Wow, very intense. There is a thin line between love and obsession. I loved it. :)

[Patrick Henry]

Wow!! lol I thought you were going to break the glass!! I ALLLLLWAYS wanted at least ONE girl to obsess over me..... but didn't get many past being friends or just for sex. There is a movie called "Cape Fear" I think you will Love to watch, if this poem is liked by YOU, too, as well! Very very intense... LOVE it!! xoxo -Mark

[Someones_Heartbreak]

Soo true haha :))

[Britt]

I enjoyed reading this, Good Job. :) There are some girls That I know, that are like this. haha. :P

[Krista Weiss]

Great poem!! I know way too many girls who are like this!!

[B-poet]

That's a very deep depiction of being obsessed with the apple of your eye. I could just feel the raw emotions jumping off the screen as I read your poem. Great job. :)

[MAC]

this is a good write...

[Morrigan Nicole]

Obsession is the single most wasteful human activity, because with an obsession you keep coming back and back and back to the same question and never get an answer.

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks for the review(;

[MAC]

completely agree with this statement

[AWickedMoon]

This poem is awesome and I agree. I have had a few friends for lack of a better word "Stalked" by ex's or girls they haven’t even dated! GReat job keep sending me RR's :)

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks for the review(: