I miss you.....

I miss you

I miss your smile

I miss the things we use to do.

I wish you could hold me for a while.

 

I miss the things you use to say.

I miss the talks at night.

I miss seeing you everyday.

I wish we never had that fight.

 

I miss knowing you were mine.

I miss never being a afraid.

I miss our love so divine.

I wish I never got played.....

 

Author's Note

So I wrote this a few months ago about an ex....the same person I wrote "I'm Sorry" for.... and believe me when I say I DONT miss him. But at this point I really did.
RIP Leslie&Tristin

Reviews

[Racy Daniel]

Beautifully written!!!

[ROSALIND]

good work nice flow of words

[David the writer]

I totally get you, and could tell you a sad story but this is a review, right?. It flowed great, and I liked the comsistancy too, it adds to the ending. Nice poem.

[B-poet]

Missing a boyfriend or girlfriend who you've truly loved from the get go becomes a humbling experience after their gone when break-ups happen. Absence does make the heart grow fonder. Great job writing this poem. I hear your message loud and clear. :)

[TheArtOfInsanity]

We've all been through this kind of pain, and as writers, I'm sure we've all written on it, and I love how your writing seems more personal, not just for yourself, but for the reader as well. Good job.

[AWickedMoon]

It was a great write! :)

[Zap-the-awesome]

Been there. It hurts for a while but when it's over you end up happier eventually. Great work!

[AWickedMoon]

I can relate to this poem as well. In fact I was with him for 4 years! But im much happyeir now!

[Lexi Villanueva]

Its sweet

[bryandc15]

Nice write.... I can picture yourself in this piece. Very emotional. Keep penning my friend:)

[SuicidePact.]

I am in love with this!!!