TURN AROUND!!!!!

When you walk pass me in the hallway,

        I wish you would.....

           TURN AROUND

 

When you pass by me on the sidewalk,

        I wish you would.....

             TURN AROUND

 

When you drive by my house,

        I wish you would.....

             TURN AROUND

 

When I let you walk away that day,

        I wish I would have made you....

            TURN AROUND

 

Author's Note

I dont eve know what to say about this.....just something I think about everyday

Reviews

[Ees]

First line: I think "pass" is meant to be "past"?
Other than that this is a well executed and relatable poem. Great job. Everyone has been there and thought of that.

[Baby Ricochet]

I can't tell you how many times I've said to myself "C'mon pretty baby, turn around." So yes I relate to this.

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! So sad but I know exactly how you feel! Really great job with this!!

[s y e]

Awwww, I liked the repitition in this write.

Good job

[Time's The Bond]

You want him to notice you I totally get it.