PROM QUEEN DOWN!!

Id like to tell you a story,

About my amazing glory.

Of when I slayed the evil prom queen.

Trust me she was really mean.

All she did was bully people.

It was like a never ending sequel.

Something needed to be done!

So now its time for me to have a little fun.

I  decided on prom night,

That would steal her spotlight.

That seemed fair.

And if it wasn't  I didn't care.

I needed to stand my ground.

I was sick of seeing people get pushed around.

So I bought the perfect dress.

I did my hair, my make up. ALL that mess.

And as my new status began to grow,

Her jealousy  began to show.

I had the one thing I would need,

To make sure I would succeed.

And I got it by being nice.

Looks like I held all the dice.

The votes were mine!

And she was running out of time,

So as prom night came,

I watched as she held her head down in shame.

Because when they placed that crown on my head,

I knew her evil ego was dead.

Reviews

[Sarah Lynn]

You're such a great writer! I love this one too!

[Lexi Villanueva]

I want to laugh to me I find
This poem very funny.-100
Points because this poem is
Really terrific!

[Secret Lullaby]

Thank you so much!!

[Kenfucius69]

This is terrific! Wonderful poem!

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! haha great poem! :P

[Holly Mason]

truly adorable..true story?
either way it is a good write- written cleverly with sarcasm
cute title choice
thank you for sharing

[Simon Welsh]

I never went to Prom aha. Never saw the point. This is a good way to kill those false idols (reputation-wise). Nice.

[Secret Lullaby]

To tell you the truth, I didn't go to prom either:)

[Simon Welsh]

No point aha. People suck xP

[Secret Lullaby]

Too much judgment if you ask me. XD

[Simon Welsh]

Exactly! I think I stayed home and got drunk xD

[Secret Lullaby]

haha and I bet you had way more fun!

[Simon Welsh]

Hahaha I can't remember it so I must have.

[Secret Lullaby]

LOL XD

[Simon Welsh]

Best way to be x)

[Secret Lullaby]

Hahaha I guess soo:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love your writing its so amazing you are my favorite writer on this sight so far enjoying ur poems keep writing :)

[Secret Lullaby]

Awww thank you:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

ur most welcome :)

[B-poet]

Very witty and well written. That stuck up prom queen didn't have a chance from the get go. Great job. An interesting and entertaining read. :)

[Rhea752]

YES!!!!! Victory!!!! It's about time that evil b***h was slain.well done that was a great write!! :D

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks:)

[CriticalxxAngel]

This was really, really good the flow and rhyme in it was awesome. I think this is a poem that girls can especially realate to because lets be honest we all know girls like this. Great Job!