Hate myself

how i feel sometimes

 

 

I hate myself! I hate myself becuse of what I want and what I want,can never be possible.

I feel like im am chained to this unwanted desire and I cant break free.

I hate you for making me feel this way!!! You are like a peace of silver falling from the light of the moon at midnight.I just wish your ever- lasting glow would take me away from this darkness that is trying to control me.I hate myself so why do u make me love you

Reviews

[Seanne Tholltree]

nice piece of hate..hehe

[Lillianna Rey]

amazing....thats all i can say!

[Roe]

Great poem!

[paradise]

loved it

[Cara<3]

That's really good!(:

[jimmy]

Goodness, this poem is very raw with hate, and a sense of hope. This poem was a great piece of work, but I'm kind of concerned for you. Though, I shouldn't really worry. You seem like a great person, I think you can get through things. Great job with your poems. :)

[Eleanor]

Great job
-Eleanor

[jennifer little]

wonderful poem

[Jordan's Back]

You are like a peace of silver falling from the light of the moon at midnight.

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