Slowly Falling

 

 

 

Im slowly faling

It's no use

Yet I still hear you calling

 

I try to scream

The rushing water is to loud

But im not as afrade as i may seem

 

This has been my plane

You may not have known

But forgive me if you can

 

If Death ever came knocking

You would run and hide

I would great,

As if it were something kind

 

My time has come,

Dont even try to run

 

Im slowly falling

Im there now

Angles are now calling

 

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

Your illustrative sense Of Falling in love is superb, I fell in love with this piece as hard as I fell for my first love. Amazingly wonderful write. Terrific write!!!!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this poem! I think you're a great writer!;) Keep it up.