Dont want it to end

After twelve

Not so well

Wont pretend that i want it to end.

 

Your arms hold me tight

I cling to you with all my might

I dont want it to end.

 

Your sweet breath on my cheek

causes my legs to go week

Pleas don't let it end.

 

Your lips now control me

I need you to hold me

God please dont let this end.

 

We slowly drift apart

Don't you know your breaking my heart

Why did it have to end.

 

 

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Reviews

[Lydia]

Short and effective. It pulls the reader in.

[just is]

Such a sad write, heart tugging and well written

[Whiskurz]

A very sad and well written piece.....Whisk

[Parashar]

niceeee

[Alex Vidmar]

Very deep and well written. Three thumbs up.

[Jimmy]

I love this poem it explains a lot of peoples feelings after a break up. Nice job.

[UnderCompulsion]

It is a beautiful and emotional poem.Great job,again. :)

[Secret Lullaby]

ok i know i made some mistakes but i promis i'll fix it soon :)

[Lina Grey]

Very emotional and sensuous. A couple spelling errors, "week" should be "weak" and "your" should "you're". It's a very intense and bittersweet poem. Thank you.

[T. Wes Smith]

very good.