all these feelings

He is my life,

He is my love,

He is my world.

 

He is everything I want,

He is evrything I need,

He is everything I have.

 

He is my heart,

He is my soul,

He is my dream come true.

 

He is the one thing in my life that is like perfection.

Is this love or obsession?

Author's Note

Everything in this poem is everything my best friend has told me about a guy she was in love with once.. this is for 4 you Ashley

Reviews

[Reaper]

good question posed at the end. very good poem

[Lillianna Rey]

this is truly amazing. i totally understand wat both u n ashley meant for i have been here also. great write n beatutiful flow of words

[Seanne Tholltree]

nice flow

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this! Thank you so much for dedicating this to me. That means a lot. You did a great job on typing out my bottled feelings onto the screen;)

[T. Wes Smith]

Simple, nice, it is difficult to go wrong when one writes of a feeling so powerful.

[paradise]

very nice

[Alex Vidmar]

Well written and very true for so many people! Keep on writing! I hope to read more of your works soon!

Peace.

[The Winter Grey]

This is pretty good. Though short and rather simple, you expressed the feelings with aplomb. I like the ending, the "love or obsession" part. The thing is, it's often difficult to distinguish the two. Anyway, good work.

[Jimmy]

That is a great peice u need to keep wrighting

[Lina Grey]

Love can cause such intense feelings. A lovely poem. Thank you.