Blond hair,Blue-eyed boy

Blond hair, blue-eyed boy

You were my life,my love,my joy

I loved you with all my heart

I loved you from the start

 

Blonda hair,blue-eyed boy

oh how you filled my life with joy

You gave my lips a simple tease

Laying in your arms in the summer breeze

 

Blond hair blue-eyes boy

You played my heart like a toy

You said you loved me one day

And now all I see is you walking away

 

Blond hair,blue-eyed boy

I guess I wasen't your most important toy

Becuse you are a lier,a cheater and a fake

Darling you were my biggest mistake

Author's Note

this is for a guy that truely knows how to brake a heart....

Reviews

[Alex Vidmar]

Lots of emotion in this poem. I love it. Beautifully written. Hits your readers home. Great write and an amazing read. I love reading your works and I can't wait to read more.

~Alex.

[Regrets]

wow, there is a lot of heart in this piece. Very nice.

[Sarah Greaton]

Very nicely written piece of work. Truely breath taking. :)

[The Winter Grey]

A good read. I wasn't really expecting it to end the way it did, and it worked well for the poem (although, since it was true, I guess it couldn't have ended differently anyway :D).

[Lina Grey]

Straight from the heart! The repition and rhyming helped show the raw emotion of the piece and really set the mood. A great write. Thank you.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

nice

[UnderCompulsion]

This is really good!!I like it!Nice choice of words.You've got a talent! :D

[Roe]

this is really good and sad.........nice write

[† Allybear!!! &d..]

wow, this poem makes me feel sad, Evrey poem i read like this since my breakup, has. its a good write tho

[Parashar]

these wrds r directly frm heart ,,,,,, raw, i like it