My First Kiss

 

 

I whisper to you soft and low,

Watch the stars as they shine and glow.

The wind sends me a simple kiss,

And with you I am filled with bliss.

You hold me close and tight,

As I cling to you with all my might.

We sailed away on this perfect dream.

Is this as perfect as it seems?

I look into your glistening eyes,

Oh how this moment feels just right.

You lean in as I hlod my breathe

Oh I hope this this is not a test

As I welcome true loves first kiss

Reviews

[shunik]

sweet and nice =]

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Touching, loving piece. Nicely done. Beautiful.

[Jordan's Back]

AWWW

[Backlight Burner]

This is such a great poem!!! So sweet and romantic!

[Lost in Wonderland]

such a sweet romantic poem:)

[Drowning with Stars]

Great imagery, I really like this :)

[Asb]

such innocent feeling behind this poem...!
cute and caring :)
a nice read !

[kink]

good work but you are only concentrating on rhyming....think a little freely :)

[paradise]

Very beautiful poem well done very cute

[Shaka-Greywolf]

A very good poem and I'm hapy to have read it. Great job!