My First Kiss

 

 

I whisper to you soft and low,

Watch the stars as they shine and glow.

The wind sends me a simple kiss,

And with you I am filled with bliss.

You hold me close and tight,

As I cling to you with all my might.

We sailed away on this perfect dream.

Is this as perfect as it seems?

I look into your glistening eyes,

Oh how this moment feels just right.

You lean in as I hlod my breathe

Oh I hope this this is not a test

As I welcome true loves first kiss

Reviews

[Roe]

awwwww very nice and great flow :)

[Alex Vidmar]

Very sweet. Great read. Three thumbs up.

[Charile]

Aww this is so romantic! I love it

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was very romantic. I really enjoyed the description in it. Thanks for sharing.

[Lillianna Rey]

very beautiful and romantic. i love it

[tkersh]

Nice... very sweet.

[UnderCompulsion]

Such a sweet poem.Nicely done! :)

[† Allybear!!! &d..]

Awww This is so sweet. I wish my first kiss was like that :/

[Ice Girl]

Perfect poem! I loved it!