My Bloody Valentine

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On this day you celebrate love and joy.

But I have to celebrate the death of a boy.

On this day I should be happy and merry.

But all I can think about is the boy I had to bury

I still recall that cold Winter day.

When I found you laying still in the stacks of hay.

For in that gruelsome moment time had stoped.

As I looked upon every drop,

Of scarlet blood that had been spilled.

For my one true love has been killed.

I will never forget what once was mine.

I will always remeber my "bloody" Valentine

Author's Note

This an old poem that I wrote when I first started writing. It is one of my favorites.I changed a few things here and there but its mostly still the same.

Reviews

[Felecia]

I can see why this is one of your favourites, because it sure it mine. It's beautiful in a tragic sort of way. I really really love this, good job

[Lover Of Words]

Way to go! Awesome

[S]

So little of words and so strong emotions....
Bravo!

[Alejandra]

Very intense even with its simplicity. Very powerful piece. I really enjoyed reading this. It gave me chills. :)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This is very cool! I find it simple and yet really powerful.

I felt so meany tension and emotions I have to say i loved it!

[Lexi Villanueva]

so amazing writer

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Really great poem!!

[beautiful dreamer]

wow! this is amazing! i love it!

[B-poet]

Vivid pain in many detailed portions of regretful nostalgia as it pertains to cupid's national holiday. Great job with this poem. :)