lost time

 

Tick. Tick. Tock.

I wish that I could stop the clock

So together we would stand

 

Tick. Tick. Tock.

It feels like my heart is going to stop

This time is moveing way to fast

I want to make this moment last

 

Tick. Tick. Tock

I wish that i could stop the clock

Never wanted that moment to end

My broken heart I'll try to mend

Reviews

[FelicityAllona]

This somehow reminds me of Cinderella. :))
Greatly penned. :))

[shunik]

yeah, time is really significant
..a great poem
just a little typo in the word 'moving'-you put it with an 'e' on the 2nd stanza
=]

[Graggz]

you just keep amazing me

[Tomislav Petricevic]

A wonderful poem! Seems simple, but it's actually quite strong! :)

[Seanne Tholltree]

short but well done

[paradise]

Very short with such simple, words but the emotion runs deep. And it really came together nicely. great write :) I really love the ending sentances "Never wanted that moment to end

My broken heart I'll try to mend"

It really shows how you feel and made a great ending

[Jordan's Back]

Another Wonderful Write

[Alex Vidmar]

Well done. Very well done. I love it. I can also relate to this poem.

[Roe]

This is very good and I can relate to every line every word and every emotion in this write

[jennifer little]

wonderful work keep it up .. great job .... loved reading this poem