I never knew

I never knew....

   

        How much I needed you

 

I never knew.....

 

       How much I would miss you

 

I never knew...

 

       How much I truely loved you

 

 

 

 

I never knew......

 

       How much you hurt

 

I never knew.....

 

       How much you cried

 

I never knew....

 

       How much you hated life

 

 

 

I never knew....

       

       That I was running out of time

 

I never knew.....

 

   That you were planing on ending your life

 

I never knew.....

 

   That I was going to lose you so soon

Reviews

[FelicityAllona]

[shunik]

..unique structure and content
=]

[Distant horizons]

Heartbreaking words, beautifully penned

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I have to agree with the other comments. It is an excellent poem indeed, but sad at the same time. It was interesting to read :)

[Roe]

this is such a sad poem but its really good as well..

[jennifer little]

wonderful and exalent poem great job and great work looks like you spent lots of time and work into this great job i love it and thanks for sharring this with me

[SuicidePact.]

loved the used of the red, it put emphasis on those words! loved this poem

[Lowesy]

hey, so yeah good poem... felt it stopped a bit short but still good, well done!