Love/Hate

 

I hate this!!

I hate when we fight.

I hate being mad at you.

I hate losing sleep.

I hate it when you yell.

I hate not being able to talk to you.

 

But I still love you!!

I love it when you hold me.

I love it when you kiss me.

I love being the one you want.

I love haveing long talks on the phone.

I love dreaming about you at night.

I love that you love me too.

 

I know we dont always agree.

I know sometimes we are going to fight.

I know that you will always be there for me.

I know you're the only one I want!

Reviews

[SuicidePact.]

aww this was great! I liked how you used the 'I hate,I love, i know' at the beginning of every line. I liked the way it sounds when I say it aloud. My favorite line was: But I still love you!

I've felt hate toward someone even though deep down I want to love them, I hate all the bad things but somehow the good things cancel out the bad.

I just really liked this poem, it was beautiful!