The way a guy SHOULD treat you

The way a guy SHOULD treat you

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

 Reach for my hand.

Not for my breast.

Kiss my cheek.

Not my neck.

Whisper that you love me.

And not that you just ''want'' me.

Lets cudle all night.

Not make out till er can't breathe.

Do want to be with me?

Or are you just trying to get in my pants?

You say that I should ''proove'' that I love you.

Well can't you tell by the way I look at you?

Or the way you make my heart skips a beat.

Why can't my love just be all you need right now?

Why do you need " more'' from me?

If you truely love me,

Then 'YOU'' can proove it!

By waiting till I am ready to give you more

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


Author's Note

Secret Lullaby
I have been here....in fact i am going through this now with my boyfriend.

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This is very true. The distinction between what a guy does and should do is illustrated really well here, and I personally wish such distinctions need not be drawn. The age of the gentleman is slowly dying... I like the poem though, I didn't even notice the lack of a rhyming scheme, but it worked really well for this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Good write. Full of integrity. Sadly though I fear you are just telling guys what lies and moves to pull in order to get there!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is so true!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very true. The distinction between what a guy does and should do is illustrated really well here, and I personally wish such distinctions need not be drawn. The age of the gentleman is slowly dying... I like the poem though, I didn't even notice the lack of a rhyming scheme, but it worked really well for this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so true. But sadly, many guys act like this...and I'm sorry you're going through that...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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