HAHA sucks to be you!!!!

I am filled with so much dred,

Sometimes I wish I was dead.

I am so sick of your nasty lies,

They are starting to attract flies.

I wish that you would just fall down a well.

Maybe then I could excape this Hell.

You remind me of a bad dream.

One that makes me want to scream.

Oh but don't worry it's not so bad,

At least it wasen't the worst kisses I ever had.

I just wish your love was real.

But I guess now you know how it feels,

To be stabed through the heart.

She had lied to you from the start.

I guess now you wished you didn't leave me.

Becuse all she left you with was an STD.

SUCKS TO BE YOU!!!!!!!!

 

 

Reviews

[shunik]

i love the title
it tells the whole thing
=]

[jennifer little]

good poem

[hopelessromantic]

AWSOME ITS LIKE EAT YOUR HEART OUT

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This is amazing, powerful, and I absolutely loved it. ANd the ending was great too haha. Very, very well done :)

[Alex Vidmar]

HAHAHAHAHA you need to read my story "Necro-Nympho" Very similar in the ending! This is great :) Loved it.

[Daniel]

Sure does. :

[Angelic Surrender]

Extremely powerful. I agree. Great write.

[Roe]

very powerful amazing write

[just is]

WOW such a powerful rant.

[SuicidePact.]

wow powerful verse here, brang back some memories for me and i have certain felt like this before. A certain someone came to mind as I read this!!