In the mirror

When I look in the mirror I see,

A girl that should be me.

I look at her glistening honey eyes,

And you would never know about all the tears she has cried.

I bet you couldn't even tell that her smile is fake.

But that just shows you how much pain she can take.

You might see a girl without a care.

But thats not fare.

You dont know about her scars,

Or how deep they are.

I wish I was that girl "you" see.

Maybe some day that girl will be me.

 

Reviews

[shunik]

thumbs up
vivid as it is
=]

[Alex Vidmar]

I agree with Autumn and Sinclaire.

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks (;

[Alex Vidmar]

You're very welcome :)

[Secret Lullaby]

:D

[Alex Vidmar]

;) hahaha. message me?

[Andrew Vaughn]

very well written i really like this.

[Autumn]

It's a beautiful poem, it reminds me so much of me in a way... so many people that seem happy but you never know what's really happening behind the door. Well written!

[Sabrina Marie]

wise
witty
& Well established!

Keep up the amazing work.

[Blue Ivory]

fair*

A very sad, very beautiful poem. It has a nice hopeful and optimistic ending. Good work!

[BatFan38]

I loved it!

[SuicidePact.]

gahhhhhh love this!

the first two lines are amazing!!

[Angelic Surrender]

Deep emotions here. Nice write

[Daniel]

Honestly, I don't care how many scars run through a girl's face, her tears may run passed it dozens of times but to me they just make her look more beautiful.