CRAZY

You all think I have gone insane?

Honey just wait till I becume unchained.

Fear is only in your mind.

So it is only a matter of time,

Till the fear takes control.

Getting rid of it is my goal.

Don't even try to understand.

 I don't want you reach out your hand.

I am not afrade to fall.

I am ready to end it all.

Things are starting to get a lil hazey.

I guess I have finally gone crazy.

Reviews

[Broken Soul]

I really enjoyed reading this, I feel as I am the one saying these words.. I did stop and stare at the misspelling of the words, maybe that's just my ocd though ;)

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks for the review(: I misspelled the words on a purpose. Do you really think a crazy person would write every word correctly?

[Belinda]

I kind of like the misspelling in this. It just shows how, uncertain the person is writing it. I don't know if that was intended or not, but the poem flows with it, and it doesn't distract me at all. I quite enjoyed this.

[Toni Blackerby]

this is very cool and i love it

[Olivia Ashley]

This is really good

[NoelleRash]

Try free verse. Your rhymes are forced. It messes up the meter.

[Personne]

Oh my goodness, I love this poem. The rhyming is spot on. I can also feel the cascade to insanity. Wonderful!!

[Crazy Cat Man]

we all reached our breaking points. a temporary insanity is quite healthy. ive been through it then recover again.

[Perfect Mistake]

Its so short and simple, i love it. With every line i got more and more into this. The rhyming helped get the point through that much more. I liked the point of this poem also, what it stands for. Good job :3

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Deep and introspective, interesting the philosophy behind it: Fears + Time = Craziness

[Rhea752]

lolz i like it this is a good poem of self questioning keep it up :)