CRAZY

You all think I have gone insane?

Honey just wait till I becume unchained.

Fear is only in your mind.

So it is only a matter of time,

Till the fear takes control.

Getting rid of it is my goal.

Don't even try to understand.

 I don't want you reach out your hand.

I am not afrade to fall.

I am ready to end it all.

Things are starting to get a lil hazey.

I guess I have finally gone crazy.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is good and shows your wild side which not a lot of people can unleash. There happens to be a few mistakes though. If you don't mind I'll point them out? :D

(Honey just wait till I becume unchained) "becume" should be *become*
(I am not afrade to fall) "afrade" should be *afraid*
Also in the line (Things are starting to get a lil hazey) I don't know why but the word "lil" distracts me. Maybe try spelling it all the way out like this:
Things are starting to get a little hazey* See, it makes the sentence more full. I don't know if that's only me but it looks and sound better.

Other than those mistakes, this poem is amazing! Keep it up ;)

Your best friend-- :)