Crashing waves

I hear the screaming of the waves.

The Winds angry slaves

As they crash on the shore.

I hear them scream "please no more''.

But the wind just keeps pushing them.

I wonder when this madness will end.

The Wind sends out a chilling yell.

And it seems that the waves have fell.

Things are now starting to seem calm.

Everything is back to the way it belongs.

Author's Note

I was on the way to the beach today and it was storming...the waves were soooo big and they were crashing onto the shore..it was so loud

Reviews

[Alex Vidmar]

Great description :)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great poem, enjoyed the natural theme and the personification of the wind and the waves, nice imagination :)
Good job :)

[Perfect Mistake]

Very vivid, The ocean/beach is always a sight to behold. Good work :3

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Good poem, your imagery/thoughts can also be reflected on people, how they keep pressuring others around them until something happens that returns everything back to way it used to be.
But I feel the poem would be better if you made your rhyme constant.
Still, cool job!

[Blue Ivory]

You have talent. It's nice that you can keep posting these on a regular basis =)

[Rhea752]

I LOVE THIS PIECE!!!!!!!!!! this is amazing so artistically expressed and inspiring keep it up :)