Vampire Personality

Standing alone under the starry sky,
abandoned by you and left to die.
My heart is bursting inside of my chest,
blood raining down into my cupped hands.
How could you be so cruel and unemotional?

Poet is your disguise, you’re lunatic within.
I’ve fought against the pain you’ve caused me,
but no matter what you will always win.
The crimson rose you presented to me,
then without remorse you took it back,
to give it to another lover-
one who is more delicate, yet cruel.
Your vampire personality
is going to drain the life out of me.

Reviews

[smiggle wiggle]

this is amazing! i love it. :) keep writing.

[jumbie's #1 fan]

Oh wow, this is sad and has a creepy twist to it. Very intriguing.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This piece is full of emotions and I like the title of it... It's sad how some people can just drain you of life just like a vampire... how ever, i am a vampire wannabe so yeah... lol... I like this your emotions jump off the page and it just flowed perfectly... Great Job!