Bliss

Just a thought I had

Hate is anger

Anger is rage

Rage is passion

Passion is desire

Desire is love

Love is bliss (sometimes)

Bliss is the states of mind we should all hope to have

Author's Note

Just give me your honest thoughts

Reviews

[deeps]

this is very good!
I enjoyed this.

[Jessica Mai]

I like it. Short and sweet with a very good concept and idea. Good Job :)

[P.S I Love You]

WOW!!!! very good -claps-

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Short, but Wow!

[Elizabeth]

Simple, but as I said about your other poem (In my Darkest Hour), the message is profound. You know, I've always been told that to hate someone you must have loved them, but it never made sense to me before. But from this, I can really get it. I don't know if I agree with the idea that to achieve bliss you must first experience hate, but I respect the idea anyhow. ^_^ Great write.

[Kia-chan!]

Very interesting... And blissful :)

[MoonlitAngel]

I like how you started out with hate, turning it into bliss and love. Very creative and interesting. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes you are correct. In the heat of bliss. Best hold on. Like you stated(sometime). Need to swim in the pleasure when you are young and strong. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[dearly beloved]

Simplistic, yet, amazing! I like it a lot deary. Though, I find bliss to be the feeling you get when you take three anti-depressants at once... False happiness.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I enjoyed this. All of it is true in my opinion. I think you did a good job on this one. :)