"Fallon's God" Teaser

"Fallon's God" Teaser

A Story by Askew
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A tiny teaser of a book I plan on writing.

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"You seem to forget, my darling, that I have been a monster for longer than you've been alive," he purred, tucking a strand of sweat-soaked hair behind my ear.
With a flick of his tongue across his teeth, he continued.
"I have seen worlds created and destroyed. I have been the cause of such creation and destruction. I have spent centuries listening to women like yourself scream until their throats bled. It's become a song. The screams, the cries, the whimpers. It's all a beautiful symphony. But you, Fallon my love, shall be the sweetest song I have ever heard. I look forward to your screams. And then you'll beg and it'll become even sweeter. I will smile as you destroy your vocal cords. You will want to kill me and you'll go mad because you can't. I will keep you down here with me until your dying day."
I leaned into his touch, his callused palm rough against my face. My skin wet his with a mixture of the sweat and tears that streamed down my cheeks.
He lowered his head, brushing his lips against mine.
"Thank you," I murmured into the chaste kiss that was so at odds with the words that came from that same mouth.

© 2018 Askew


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Great teasing storyline, characters and monologue held within this tight neat read. With a good twist in the tale.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very good teaser. Tempting story line and interesting characters/conversation. Thank you Lexi for sharing.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow, this teaser definitely got my attention. I'm very eager to read this book you plan on writing, I bet it'll be great!

Posted 7 Years Ago


very chilling, interesting read...WOW!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sounds promising!
The last line in particular is really chilling. I like this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Well then. This looks interesting.

Good s**t.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on December 18, 2018
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Askew
Askew

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I’m 24, and don’t write as often as I’d like. more..