Alone

Idk...its a piece of crap but ay im bored so there

Alone

I'm Surrounded

But Cant be found

They dont notice me

I'm falling apart you see 

 

I miss the past

Now everything is just going to Fast

Love is Gone, Trust is Gone

This cant go on

 

They say i'm depressed, sad

But i'm not im just...mad

I wish they could understand

I just feel bland

 

I'm just alone

I'm an Individual

I'm Isolated

Does it Matter??

Reviews

[Impulse]

No one is alone and friends are always there and blah blah blah. I won't bore you with my talk. Just stopped by to say that I like this one too. If you ever need someone to listen, I'll lend an ear. Good job =]

[Matt]

Yes. it does matter.
Lexi, you are too important as young writer
and a young women that the world needs to share her life and talents with.
Your never alone. everyone feels like this at some point.
but being lonely is not permanent, especialy since your so young.
Girl youve got allot of life ahead of you, s**t will happen.
S**T does happen.
But dont let it change who you are.
Live to be happy.
Overall Great write.
peace

[kirstey Lost,Crushed,Co..]

this is amazing :) well done =D

[Krazy On The Outside]

I like how you capatalized the words.
Great poem! I love it! =)

[shanise]

wow that is really good! i love it, it reminds me of my life.... It has a nice flow and i love the rimes