Suicide

This is not from my p.o.v. I wanted to try something different. I hope i conveyed the persons feelings right

My back's against the wall

I feel numb

Its nearly over...

I rub the blade on my skin

Looking for the right place to cut

 

Finally i find a perfect place right on my vein

I gently leave a deep incision on my wrist

I still dont feel anything

I saw my blood fall to the sides of my arm

It spreads

 

My eyes slowly close

I had did it

I commited suicide

It was finally over

Reviews

[r]

was this written for my contest? coolio....i really like it.... good luck in my contest

[Elizabeth]

Wow...I could just sense the feeling and lack of power...or power...this person had...amazing. :O

[XxToxicAngelxX]

This is very well writen, so much emotion. Great job!

[LivingDeath]

Good write, havnt we all wanted to do that at one point or another, i know i have. Good Write i can feel the emotion.

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

Very VERY deep... I liked this alot. great write. =D

[Osvaldo Saldana]

Deep. really deep. shows emotion