Smile

Well this was about an old friend...he/she changed so ya

Why won't you smile?

It will only last for a while

Your always sad

Its getting me mad

Your life was fun..Happy

Now your being Sappy

Now you make yourself scar

You've gone to far

So for now just smile

It will only last for a while

 

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

Good job! I really like the meaning...but PLEASE take the definition out! It ruins the rhythm and mood of the poem. Good job though! :D

[gravitylava]

I think you should take the definition out of the poem, if people don't know what it means then they will probably figure it out. lol. I like this, but it is kind of dull. the grammatical errors (your should be you're, to should be too, etc.) kind of ruins it for me. But i like the idea. Good start! :)