Silence

Just wrote it

We see each other everyday

But we say no words

When we walk by each other

We just look at each other 

Then continue to where were going

I know we want to talk

But were scared if what happened the year before 

Will happen again…

I know we both miss our friendship 

One of us needs to break the silence

 

Author's Note

Egh..sucks (MY USUAL COMMENT)

Reviews

[Thorn]

I enjoyed it. It definitely doesn't suck ^^
However, using the word "other" two lines in a row looked a little odd. Is it possible to substitute one of them for another word?

Otherwise; great job!

[Dom]

I just thought that I would return the favor and read a poem or 2 lol. Anyways, it def. didn't suck! I thought u did a good job and i enjoyed it. oh and random stuff: i seen u like Fallout Boy and Paramore. Kudos woman! lol they're awesome.

[Bud]

No it doesn't suck. It is actually quite good. Sometimes, we have to be the one to bow down and cross under the line to break the silence. Then later we discover that we are rather glad we did it. It takes being strength, and being humble to do these things. Anyone can be stubborn, like an a*s. But it takes a strong and intelligent person to be the one to let bygones be bygones. Offering a willingness for forgiveness. Excellent piece of poetic art.

[Wicahpi]

So be the Brave One and go for it!

[kirstey Lost,Crushed,Co..]

realll good :)

[Arthur Crow]

It's always hard to break the silence! Well expressed and very much felt.

[Coyote Poetry]

It don't suck. Just your feeling raw and full of passion. I wrote 40 book of raw and rough poetry. Now I edit and I hope I create better poetry. Sometime it is good to go back later. Re-read and try to make better. A excellent poem.
Coyote