I changed.

SUckish i havent written in a while

Remember when I was always full of Joy

You treated me as if I was just a toy

But I didn’t care I was in love

Now look what you’ve done

I’m not the same happy girl

I’m now a dark girl

My friends get mad

Because I’m sad

I’m sorry I changed…

It wasn’t arranged

I couldn’t take it anymore

You left me for that w***e

I changed my hair

I changed what I wear

I started to be alone

Only talked through phone

I started to write

All through the nights

I expressed my feelings 

What I could never do by talking

I try to change to the positive me

When I was always so happy

But she’s long gone…

I don’t know what I’m doing wrong

Reviews

[Impulse]

We can't let one person destroy who we are, but I can definently relate to this. Sigh. Love hurts when not handled with care, but I also believe it can heal anything. Friends will help you through the tough times if you just open up to them. Beautiful =]

[Holly-Marie]

Very sad but beautiful. It flowed beautifully. Full of emotion.

[cheeeeese]

Very expressive and very sorrowful. I could sort of relate to this, I think you put alot of emotion into this and it made it a great piece. I liked your rhyming scheme as well, it didn't seem forced. You did a great job :)