You Dont Know Me, You Dont Even Care.

You Dont Know Me, You Dont Even Care.

A Poem by Alexis Ortega

                                  I can see it when you look at me
Like before yet somehow differently
Don’t push me away don’t say it’s too late
I love you, please don't make me wait
Tell me what to do to make you stay
So close but yet so far away
 "Love"
What does it really mean?
To fall into sweet misery
I know that you can feel it too
Although you try to hide the truth
If you really love me,  let me know
Either be with me or let me go
 It's been so long since our first kiss
The time we spent in perfect bliss
Despite the fact I may have changed
The way I feel remains the same
Though I act like I’m fine I’m dying inside
You’re the only one that can make it right
 
 
 

 

© 2010 Alexis Ortega


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Alexis Ortega
it's not the best, but it's honest.

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I love the whole last stanza. I totally get the
"You think you have me figured outBut secretlycan't help but doubt"
I myself have felt this myself. Or more i think thats what my lover thinks.
"You're all that goes on inside my head" I loved this line too. Many times have I been doubted on this particular subject and for him doubting me, it makes me think that perhaps i'm not all that goes on inside his head. Gah, sorry to get into my personal bogus, but my point is i can relate.
I also liked how you bolded some words for emphasis. Very eye catcthing.
Kudos my friend, keep it up.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love the whole last stanza. I totally get the
"You think you have me figured outBut secretlycan't help but doubt"
I myself have felt this myself. Or more i think thats what my lover thinks.
"You're all that goes on inside my head" I loved this line too. Many times have I been doubted on this particular subject and for him doubting me, it makes me think that perhaps i'm not all that goes on inside his head. Gah, sorry to get into my personal bogus, but my point is i can relate.
I also liked how you bolded some words for emphasis. Very eye catcthing.
Kudos my friend, keep it up.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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