waiting

These are things that I want to tell someone who just doesn't deserve to know.

Because your too stupid to see, because you just don't see it coming, because when she's finished you'll be full, because I'm too stupid to know a good thing when its in front of me, because I gave you away, because you loved me first, because I cannot move on...

Author's Note

I don't know why but its hard and I can't move on, I've tried, because thats what I'm supposed to be doing right?

Reviews

[Lanky]

I just got broken up with after two years. I loved her with my entire heart and she cast it away as if it wasn't worth anything. but why can't you move on? thats simple, no one has yet come forth who's amazing enough to help you move on. I still hold onto the faith that there is love in this world. Am i right? who knows....

I do know one thing I like your poetry =)

[Marshall Hanson]

Very good poem. I can relate it truly sucks. It's been 2 months and I still can't move on. It's one of those day by day things. Keep writing your great!

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. sometimes we expect too much from ourselves and too soon ... maybe we need to let go and let ourselves feel what we are feeling ... and wait patiently for new feelings ... your words are well written and presented ...

[Blaise]

very good. i liked this a lot since I've felt some of these same feelings before. nice write!