My Tears, Their Bliss

A short simple dark themed poem of which the meaning I'll leave a mystery to be guessed.

My head feels like a cloud

Their laughter is just too loud

Around me stands a large crowd

My tears and pain making them proud

"We promise to destroy her" they vowed

"With her ashes we'll sew her shroud"

And as I run and they capture me once again they say

"come back here, That's not something we allowed!"

After all, it's nothing but the pain they've inflicted, which I have endowed

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Very deep...you have expressed your feelings very well...I liked this...
Around me stands a large crowd
My tears and pain make them proud...
I love these lines the most...

[Li Yan]

Thank you! Yes, those lines were indeed quite effective. I'm glad you liked them :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome.☺