The story

The story of a story you see what is a story exactly ? Is it words on paper , a tale for people to enjoy, a way to make money for authors ? WRONG!! It is not none of those things a story that's an authors blood sweat and tear to make it into a passion of what is in the authors heart and mind it is put into word on paper so you and I can enjoy what an author has done it gives the author money to make more books!. The story is none of the above my friends for it is all that and more it is a outlet and muse amongst us that came from a mind who worked for it to be our hand for the story is the story of a person who thought of the story to write the story so a story is just another story inside of it.

Reviews

[C. Rose]

Great imagery and emotion.

Please take the time to format. Punctuation errors are distracting and the 'block of text' format you use makes it unpleasant to follow. These are just technical, easy to fix things that don't affect the content of your writing. In my opinion, more will be willing to read your work if you take the time to make paragraphs.

I like the "just another story inside of it" concept and the "none of the above my friends" wording.

Courtesy of the Constructive Critics group

[Kamari's]

Yes I know I have issues with paragraphing and other things but I am earning how to better my writing and have somewhat gotten better I hope one day I can write flawlessly